I wonder by Andy D

Subject: I wonder by Andy D Tue Feb 08, 2011 10:21 pm

To Yui
From Andy:
Thanks for being my big sis XP im glad you enjoy my writing

To Ari
From Andy:
Thanks for being like a bro to me, gl with teri

To Kate
From Andy:
Thanks for being 1 of my main people who loved my songs.

To Marissa
From Andy:
REALLY BIG THANKS for helping me with grammar <3 love ya sis.

To Anna:
From Andy:
I love ya hun and this song goes out to you.

Ooh yeah heads up
Look for myfriends who write poems(not sure if they post online)
KittyGirls
Tacos4Life
Dance2Death
and
FallingStar
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I wonder by Andy Do

Verse 1:
So let me tell how it began
Once upon a time
Its about back then
When we could just sing rhymes

So lets start
With me crying
When a girl ripped me apart
And now I'm screams
WHY CAN'T I BE DYING

I said I loved you
she said it back
but what I got
was just all crap

Chorus

So who isn't curious
On what love is
And surpised your not furious
From my little kiss

So all I got to say

(2x)
I wonder if you care
I wonder if you cry
I wonder if you're happy
Being by my side

Verse 2:
I was looking
For someone to care
Someone to love
But life isn't fair

Months Later
I got my chance
To meet my girl here
And learn how to dance

So you smiled
I was glad we met
So I told her"I love you"
And asked her,
To join me in a duet

Chorus

So who isnt curious
On what love is
And surpised your not furious
From my little kiss

So all I got to say

(2x)
I wonder if you care
I wonder if you cry
I wonder if you're happy
Being by my side

Ending:
Its been 6 months,9 days,2 hours too long
Since you and me started
So get ready for more songs
And please don't depart T-T.

4 more years
Untill I can hold you
So don't shread any tears
Since you know I'm here
and what to do

So now i'll say this.
So you can see,
I'll go down on 1 knee
And will you marry me?

Verse 1:
imma keep this nice and sweet so this is how it all happen
My last gf left me for my best friend

Chrous:
my friend was trying to make a song out of the bible and ya i turned it into something
of my own

Verse 2:
Its about abit when I started dating and met anna <3(love ya hun)

Ending:
My hopes

Subject: Re: I wonder by Andy D Wed Feb 09, 2011 5:31 pm

Don't go emo on us now, dude.

Samurai Posts : 1153 Join date : 2010-08-31 Age : 30

LOL lKKlReborn how is that a song xD

Subject: Re: I wonder by Andy D Wed Feb 09, 2011 8:10 pm

*bangs bongos while people are snapping*

Subject: Re: I wonder by Andy D Wed Feb 09, 2011 9:03 pm

what o.o

its the start of my song .

The first part is suppose to be about an emo kid

Samurai Posts : 1153 Join date : 2010-08-31 Age : 30

|KK|Reborn wrote:: I wonder by Reborn

So let me tell a tale
Once upon a time
Its about a young male
Singing an old rhyme

So lets start
With the boy crying
When a girl ripped him apart
And he now screams
WHY CAN'T I BE DYING

So this whole part is your song? Who is it for @_@

Subject: Re: I wonder by Andy D Thu Feb 10, 2011 5:33 pm

this is part and it says start of song

Samurai Posts : 1153 Join date : 2010-08-31 Age : 30

So your going to make another thread with another part of the song?

Subject: Re: I wonder by Andy D Tue Feb 15, 2011 7:49 pm

i'm done

Samurai Posts : 1153 Join date : 2010-08-31 Age : 30

Nice job

Subject: Re: I wonder by Andy D Tue Feb 15, 2011 10:08 pm

Thank ya Tofu :3!
Its my gift to my gf for v-day(i know im late XP)

Subject: Re: I wonder by Andy D Wed Feb 16, 2011 1:26 am

It's very cute. Great job, Reborn.

Samurai Posts : 1153 Join date : 2010-08-31 Age : 30

Hey it's only 2 days late x] anyways I gave my guild in Lunia all 90 gold for valentines day, but they didn't give me anything ;O